Writing With Abandon

Reflections and ramblings about life as an educator, writer, reader, knitter, and over-thinker. Trying to do the writing only I can do.

Every day I take Phoebe out for a couple of walks to loop around our block. Though our building’s entrance sits on a loud, busy two-way street (with a 40 mph speed limit!), our balcony looks out over a quaint neighborhood where kids ride their bikes alone and locals go for jogs and house cats roam outside, taunting Phoebe, who always wants to play with them. The houses are unassuming, some of them quite simple, many of them beautiful and interesting to look at.

In December, as I rounded the corner to do my regular loop, I saw that one house was getting demolished. I covered my face and squinted my eyes and speed-walked away to avoid the dust getting kicked up. Since then, every day on my walks, I’ve seen this house get built faster than I’ve ever seen a house being constructed before. They must know some people, because I’m used to seeing empty lots for longer than expected and hearing about timelines getting pushed out.

But this house? It’s going up fast, and it’s massive. Most of the homes are only single-level — this one is two stories. It has fences all around that the house towers up over, and in place of its old front yard, the walls go out almost to edges of the fence. I wonder if they’ve designed it so a pool and garden sit in the middle of the house, like the hole in an Oreo.

Every day as I walk by, I notice the rapid daily progress. The workers move quickly but intentionally. Smoothing cement over the brick walls. Lifting bars. Placing the long, tall windows.

Directly across the street, in front of one of the more typical homes of the neighborhood, sit four blue fold-out picnic chairs, from which a few neighbors will often sit and observe the progress as well. When I pass and they’re sitting there, we nod and wave at each other, letting out a soft laugh that signals we’re both looking at the new construction with a mixture of awe, interest, and disbelief (and a bit of disgust, if we’re honest!).

I wonder when the house will be complete and what noises will emanate from it as I pass on my daily walks. I wonder if other homes in the neighborhood will follow suit, or if this house will stick out like the sore thumb it is. I wonder if the chairs in front of the neighbor’s house will disappear after the construction show ends, or if they sit there all the time to watch the neighborhood’s ebb and flow.

I don’t think Phoebe notices at all.

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9 responses to “Rapid Daily Progress”

  1. bullets and blanks Avatar

    it’s amazing how fast they can build. I love the anecdote of folding chairs, that sounds so wholesome. A loop that I walk in my neighborhood, has a summer driveway meetup. BYO chair and beverage and someone will make a fire pit in the driveway. It’s really cute. Enjoy the walking weather!

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    1. Amy Crehore Avatar

      That’s so nice! We have so many friendly neighbors in our building and in the neighborhood. The next step is befriending those neighbors. The summer driveway meetup sounds like a really cute way to!

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  2. ilizelaya Avatar

    I love how you took me on your walk with you.

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  3. Ana Valentina Patton Avatar

    I love this slice! You have such a talent with words and descriptions. So vivid, making a simple walk so, so interesting!

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  4. Estelle Gonzalez Avatar

    The development in Miami never ceases to amaze me. I feel a bit of disgust too! What an interesting slice about the construction you see on your dog walks!

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  5. arjeha Avatar

    It is amazing to watch a house go up. I have friends who’ve built a new house recently and in like four months they were in and settled.

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  6. Jill Bless Avatar

    Love all the details you notice on your walk. An exciting time on your block! I wonder what future events you will get to watch unfold.

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  7. giannaoleary Avatar

    I loved how you ended your slice with all the wonders on how this house could change the neighborhood

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  8. Alysia Xirinachs Avatar

    I laughed at the last little tidbit about Phoebe not noticing. The four chairs and all of your observations (yours and the chairs) reminded me of a word in Milanese “umarell” it refers to old men who watch construction sites to criticize how they’re working. It definitely isn’t what you’re doing, but it came to mind. We all like to watch the new builds! And, in my case, hate them if they don’t match the aesthetic of the neighborhood.

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