Writing With Abandon

Reflections and ramblings about life as an educator, writer, reader, knitter, and over-thinker. Trying to do the writing only I can do.

The Sanderling

The bird scurries so quickly, it looks like he’s ice skating across the sand. One leg moving as the other hover-floats, skiing between the seaweed slopes.

He speeds back and forth, drawing loop-de-loops, but remains ever ahead of me at my easy pace. I walk along the shoreline, sun beaming on my face, wind strong. The bird guides me, flitting along in search of something to eat.

As we walk, me behind him, I people watch.

A young girl sits in the sand, her legs beside her like a mermaid. She lets the water rush across them, her head hanging back, her long braids waving.

The bird scurries on.

A toddler explores with his hands, stands up holding a shell, looking for Mommy.

The bird speeds ahead.

A boy and his dad have built an excellent shelter and moat. The boy cheers as a wave crashes against their strong wall. The dad smiles and says hello as I pass.

The bird zips back and forth.

What kind of bird is this? I wonder. Smaller than a child’s shoe. White with grey flecks on his back. A long black beak.

A quick internet search yields sanderling, the name deriving from the Old English sand-yrðling, meaning “sand-ploughman.”

He flits ahead, faster now, joins in with a friend, the two seesawing as they plow the sands. I stretch up and shield my eyes from the sun, look out at the sea, then turn around.

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6 responses to “The Sanderling”

  1. sallydonnelly11 Avatar

    You captured your walk on the beach so well. Your comparative word choice is the best – like he’s ice skating, like a mermaid, Adding the dictionary origin for the bird name added more. Your slice shows what a great observe you are and also was a master at descriptive writer you are. Thanks for taking me along on your walk!

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    1. Amy Crehore Avatar

      Thank you, Sally!

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  2. Ana Valentina Patton Avatar

    The first paragraph told me I was about to read something incredibly gorgeous, and it only got better and better! A mentor slice, for sure. Could we immerse ourselves in it as we do for our students? Pulling craft moves I could learn to use?🥰

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    1. Amy Crehore Avatar

      😅🥹 now I’m like you with the compliments! 🤭 I love you!

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  3. Melanie Meehan Avatar

    Love the repetition in this piece. Sometimes I read slices and I think about how well they’d translate to the pages of a picture book. This one translates.

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    1. Amy Crehore Avatar

      Wow! This comment humbles me. I’ve never thought to see my writing in that way until you said it. Thank you 💛💛

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